7 Headline Writing Links That Will Revolutionize Your Content Marketing
Posted on 17. Mar, 2012 by Robert Bruce in Blog, conversion, Copywriting, Featured, Headlines, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing

This week’s links might seem a bit self-serving, but I don’t care.
Writing headlines that work is one of the most important — if not the most important — and effective ways to spend your time and effort.
If you get your headlines right, it’ll transform the spread of your ideas. If you get them wrong, you’ll miss countless opportunities with your content.
Use these links. Read them. Re-read them. Most importantly, understand why these formulas work.
Practice writing headlines that people want to click, and (paraphrasing Dr. Seuss) see where this craft takes you …
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How to Write Headlines That Work
A basic definition of why good headlines matter, followed by the individual contsructions of eight major headline categories, courtesy of Mr. Bob Bly. Read this post alone, and you’ll know more about headlines than most working writers.
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10 Sure-Fire Headline Formulas That Work
The “how to” headline is a faithful workhorse, but sometimes you need to get out, stretch your legs, and try something different. These 10 formulas are proven to engage readers, but don’t just copy and paste them on top of your article. Dig deeper, work to understand why these formulas work, and then make them your own.
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9 Proven Headline Formulas That Sell Like Crazy
Mr. Rieck opens up 9 more headline formulas in this article, expanding on each with an important “why”. And don’t worry, he includes plenty of useable examples to pick apart and learn from.
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7 More Sure-Fire Headline Templates That Work
At this point, Clark has basically given away the farm. Seriously, if you’ve studied the articles in this list so far — really studied — you’ve been given the keys to kingdom where headlines are concerned. If they don’t read your headline, they don’t read you.
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Warning: Use These 5 Headline Formulas at Your Own Risk
And now for a bit of an alarm. Yes, learn from and use these templates. No, do not copy and paste (or, swipe) them wholesale. If you do, you’ll quickly run up against that problem of context, and he is a merciless teacher. You must understand why these formulas work before employing them. Here’s 5 more for you to use at your own risk …
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The Three Key Elements of Irresistible Email Subject Lines
An email subject line is a headline. Considering that email marketing is one of the most powerful tools you’ll use online, well, you get it. This is an important skill to master. Don’t worry, Mr. Clark takes you right through the fundamentals, the specifics and the secret sauce of how to write email subject lines that get opened.
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The Art of Writing Great Twitter Headlines
From an average reader’s perspective, Twitter is an uncontrollable firehose of text, flooding screens large and small, relentlessly moving on to the next. Every lesson that applies to writing headlines that work, must be applied to writing for Twitter … in spades. In this article, Mr. Clark shows you how to get clicked, retweeted, and followed on Twitter, through writing well specifically for the brief medium.
Did you miss anything on Copyblogger this week?
- The Ultimate Guide to Publishing Your eBook on Amazon’s Kindle Platform
- Don’t Disappoint Your Mom
- What The Bachelor Can Teach You About Hooking an Audience
- 3 Myths of Guest Writing for Big Websites … and 6 Tactics for Doing it Well
- The 10 Commandments of Landing Pages That Work
- How Chris Brogan Built His Content Platform
- 3 Seriously Good Reasons to Join Brian and Sonia at the BlueGlass LA Conference
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Understanding Plots and Sub-Plots When Writing Salesletters
Posted on 23. Jan, 2012 by nardene in Blog, Copywriting, Headlines, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing

Imagine you’re having a discussion with a hyperactive, talkative teenager.
And the conversation goes like this…
“We went to the mall, and like, there was this fire in the mall. And we went from there to the cinema, but we didn’t have any money and anyway the popcorn machine was broken, and so we didn’t really want to go to the movies without popcorn. But right after that we went to have some pizza and there was this creepy guy outside the store. But listen to this—because that’s not the best part. The best part is the Sylvie dumped Josh, and like, they ran into each other in the street…”
When we, like, write copy for our website, we like, sound a lot like that teenager
What we tend to do is go all over the place with our copy. First of course, we’ll try to stuff in about five concepts in our headline. Then we’ll try and fill in a whole bunch of sub-heads that we want to drive home.
And then our first paragraph tries to cover all the possible points. And like that teenager, we have the entire story in our heads, but nothing quite gets across to the client. And that’s because you’re trying to cover way too many points too quickly.
And as you’ve worked it out for yourself, this bounce and jumping around is exhausting for the reader or listener, and hence is a big mistake.
So let’s see how this mistake unfolds when we write copy by examining an actual piece of copy.
Headline: Are You Fed Up With Unprofessional Contractors …
Body text:
That don’t call you back or even show up?
Are you done with contractors that lack the ability to communicate in a timely manner?
Or run away from problems that crop up during and after a project?
Are you over dealing with the hacks of the world?
Have you enough of sitting home babysitting people that are you uncomfortable with?
So what’s wrong with that sequence?
Technically, nothing. The headline is perfect. It gets my attention without too much of a fuss. But then I go to read and I get between three-five main plots and no sub-plots. And how do we know they’re main plots? Because we can list them out and see for ourselves. They all want to take centre stage.
Main plot 1: Don’t call you back or even show up
Main plot 2: Lack the ability to communicate in a timely manner
Main plot 3: Run away from problems that crop up during and after a project
Main plot 4: The so-called professional is nothing but a hack.
Main plot 5: Discomfort. Having to babysit people that are you uncomfortable with
Just like that teenager’s story, it’s possible for us to jump from one to the other, without so much as pausing for breath. So now that we know we’re creating bounce, how do we get rid of this bounce? And how do we still use all of the point we want to cover on our web page?
Here’s how you do it.
Just like a movie, you have a main plot. And you have sub-plots. So what’s your main plot? It’s the client’s most pressing problem. That’s obvious, isn’t it? You’d want to get the client’s attention by driving home the biggest, scariest, buggiest problem, wouldn’t you? And here’s how we go about it.
Headline: Write your headline. Let it cover ONE big problem (that big, buggy problem)
Body text 1: Drive home the problems involved with that ONE point.
Body text 2: Drive home the consequences of that ONE point.
Body text 3: Drive home the solution to that ONE problem.
Move to the next point.
So how does this look when we put the teenager’s story in this format?
Headline: We went to the mall and there was a fire.
Body text 1: What happened next (at the mall)
Body text 2: Then what were the consequences?
Body text 3: How did we escape the fire?
With the teenager, she’d complete one story, and move to the next. And the next. But you may have made your point with a single story. So what do you do with the rest of the stuff that you so badly want to get across? You bring it up later. Let’s see how. But first let’s get back to our example.
Headline: Are You Fed Up With Unprofessional Contractors …
Body text: That don’t call you back or even show up?
Body text 1: What’s the problem with not calling back or showing up?
Body text 2: What are the consequences? Describe the emotion that the client feels, in detail.
Body text 3: What’s the best way to avoid such a desperate scenario?
And then you present your service
Body text 4: Presenting XYZ contracting company.
Body text 5: Drive home the point of calling back. How you do it. When you show up. How you follow up.
Notice we haven’t gone to Point 2 yet. And yes, I know, you’re itching to drive home that point
But notice something? The customer doesn’t care about your itch. They’re locked in to what you’re saying. You’re the first person they’ve met who isn’t like that teenager, jumping from story to story.
The customer’s biggest problem is ‘unprofessional contractors that don’t call back or show up’ and you’re doing just that. The customer wants to know more about that story in detail, before they’re ready to move to the next story.
So once you present your company and why you bring the ONE solution, you can now move on to the next story.
Except you don’t have to tell the next story in as much detail. You can now roll out the remaining stories in slightly less detail in a feature/benefit format that looks like this:
Feature 1: Benefit 1. Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah and more blahdee blah, blahdoo, blah, blah, blah. Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah and more blahdee blah, blahdoo, blah, blah, blah. Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah and more blahdee blah, blahdoo, blah, blah, blah.
Feature 2: Benefit 1. Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah and more blahdee blah, blahdoo, blah, blah, blah. Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah and more blahdee blah, blahdoo, blah, blah, blah. Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah and more blahdee blah, blahdoo, blah, blah, blah.
And so on with Feature 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8—and so on. And add benefits to every one of those features
You can have as many as 8-10 paragraphs rich with details of the problem and the solutions you bring to the customer. And having locked into the main problem and seeing how you bring that solution, the customer will happily trundle through the rest of the points, and get more convinced by the minute about your expertise and professionalism.
In short what you have is a main plot. And you drive home that main plot.
And then later, pull in the sub-plots, but without the same level of intensity as the main. Just remember that you can pick any plot to be the main plot. (e.g. ‘Sylvie dumping Josh’ has more drama than ‘no popcorn at the cinema.’ And then re-tell your story on the sales page.
ONE plot at a time
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Introducing The Lede: A Copywriting and Online Marketing Sheet
Posted on 29. Oct, 2011 by Robert Bruce in Blog, Blog Psychology, content marketing, conversion, Copywriting, Email Marketing, Entrepreneurship, Headlines, Keyword Research, Landing Pages, List Building, Metrics, persuasion, productivity, selling, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing, social media marketing, Traditional Media, Traffic

Welcome to The Lede.
Every week I’ll be digging up and linking to stories, news, and opinion relevant to online marketing and copywriting.
Email, social media, innovation, SEO, productivity, mobile, conversion, publishing, and everything in between.
No commentary, just a fast, single page of headlines that you can grab, scan, and squeeze for all they may (or may not) be worth.
All right then, on with it …
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“The easiest thing in the world for a reader to do is stop reading”
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Steve Jobs’ “Seven Rules of Success” Applied to Email Marketing
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Twitter looking for full-time Copywriter
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How the Kindle Transforms the Marketplace
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How to Write a Popular Blog Post
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The Ultimate Measure of Marketing Success
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The Strange Art of Achieving More by Doing Less
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Better Marketing Through Social Media Optimization
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5 Advanced Keyword Research Tips
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Copywriting as Online Reputation Management
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Great Content Needs to Transcend Platforms
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“‘Social sharing buttons’ are one of the least
effective tactics you can use to build your list …”
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Finding the Value of Email Marketing Through Metrics
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Building a Landing Page Using “The Backward” Tactic
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Is Rational or Emotional Copy Better for the Bottom Line?
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The Art of the Simple Content Strategy
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Marketing Advice for #occupywallstreet
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An Email Marketing Cheat Sheet
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Mobile Marketing Industry Sets Privacy Guidelines
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An SEO Copywriting Cheat Sheet
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How to Diagnose and Heal a Sick Landing Page
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Even Hollywood Needs Good Landing Pages
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It’s About What They Do, Not What They Say
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An SEO Copywriter Walks into a Bar …
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Is the New Facebook Design Killing Your Traffic?
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What Movies and Comic Books Can
Teach You About Writing Powerful Scenes
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What SEOs Must Learn From Adwords Pros
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65 Ways to Get Traffic to Your Blog
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Why Social Media Research is so Valuable
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About the Author: Robert Bruce is Copyblogger Media’s copywriter and resident recluse.
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The Art of Finding Ideas
Posted on 18. Oct, 2011 by Robert Bruce in Blog, Blog Psychology, Collaboration, content marketing, Copywriting, editing, Email Marketing, Entrepreneurship, Headlines, Landing Pages, persuasion, productivity, selling, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing, social media marketing

Every writer who has ever lived has lusted after ideas.
Where are they, how do I get them, and how do I keep them coming?
If you’ve been writing long enough, you know that — like Solomon — there is nothing new under the sun.
Try as you might to sweat them out of your head or pull them gently from the stars above, there are no new ideas.
So, relax.
But that page is not going to write itself, is it? Where then do we turn for ideas that work, ideas that move, ideas that persuade?
In short, we steal them.
The moment you free yourself from The Cult of Originality, you realize that “original” ideas do not come from within.
They are given to us, from without.
A writer should not look inside, but outside, at external sources, stories, events, and emotions.
If you’re offended that I’d suggest you “steal” ideas, please get over it. You’re already a thief, you just don’t know it yet.
Here are two of the most significant idea repositories on earth …
1. The modern media is a torrent of ideas
In this information age, you have absolutely no reason to “draw a blank”.
Ever.
What took our writing ancestors days and weeks to research and learn, takes us mere moments.
In fact, the only problem we have now is one of finding trusted curators. We need to develop self-discipline and discernment in seeking out correct information from reliable sources.
There is no drought of ideas.
You have more computing power in your pocket than it took to send men to the moon. What are you doing with it?
Indeed.
Are you wasting it or harnessing it? You don’t need to go to moon, the crossroads will do just fine for our purposes.
Research. Read. Steal.
Product manuals, literature, interviews, talk radio, magazines, newspapers, televsion, Twitter, Google Trends, movies, Wikipedia, and on and on and on …
It’s all there, right in your pocket.
And it’s actually more than you’ll ever need.
So use it. Don’t let it use you.
2. People will give you exactly what you’re looking for
Ideas are walking around everywhere out there.
Eugene Schwartz once told a story about a copywriting job he had.
He met with the client and asked him to start talking about the product. They ended up sitting together for four hours — the client talking, and Schwartz simply listening and taking notes.
Later that night, while he was waiting for his wife to get ready for a night out on Manhattan, Schwartz wrote the ad.
The entire ad.
He said about 70% of the finished copy was comprised of his client’s own words.
The headline itself was a phrase the client had hit on, word for word.
He waited two weeks, mailed the ad to the client, and they both made a lot of money.
You might think this was some kind of dirty trick on Schwartz’ part, but you’d be wrong.
Schwartz knew how to write a powerful direct response ad. The client didn’t.
Schwartz was smart enough to know that the client knew (in this case) his own product better than he ever could, and simply translated that knowledge and passion onto paper.
The ideas were sitting in the client’s head and Schwartz knew exactly what to do with them.
It goes further …
For better or worse, a writer is working all the time.
Phone calls with friends, the plumber, your spouse, your child, your boss, your client, your neighbor — they are all constantly giving you ideas.
They are all constantly telling you what they — and the entire world — truly want.
It is all grist for the mill.
All you need to do is … listen.
Steal this post
Eugene Schwartz summed this up for me perfectly:
You don’t have to have great ideas if you can hear great ideas.
I stole this post from him, and he stole it from many others.
Listen more. Talk less.
Read less. Read better.
Steal.
The Art of Finding Ideas is then … to go out and find ideas.
Originality? That’ll come from using your own voice, and your voice develops from only one thing — writing more. And more. And more.
Where have you been getting your ideas?
About the Author: Robert Bruce is Copyblogger Media’s copywriter and resident recluse.
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The Art of Finding Ideas
Posted on 18. Oct, 2011 by Robert Bruce in Blog, Blog Psychology, Collaboration, content marketing, Copywriting, editing, Email Marketing, Entrepreneurship, Featured, Headlines, Landing Pages, persuasion, productivity, selling, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing, social media marketing

Every writer who has ever lived has lusted after ideas.
Where are they, how do I get them, and how do I keep them coming?
If you’ve been writing long enough, you know that — like Solomon — there is nothing new under the sun.
Try as you might to sweat them out of your head or pull them gently from the stars above, there are no new ideas.
So, relax.
But the page is not going to write itself, is it? Where then do we turn for ideas that work, ideas that move, ideas that persuade?
In short, we steal them.
The moment you free yourself from The Cult of Originality, you realize that “original” ideas do not come from within.
They are given to us, from without.
A writer should not look inside, but outside, at external sources, stories, events, and emotions.
If you’re offended that I’d suggest you “steal” ideas, please get over it. You’re already a thief, you just don’t know it yet.
Here are two of the most significant idea repositories on earth …
1. The modern media is a torrent of ideas
In this information age, you have absolutely no reason to “draw a blank”.
Ever.
What took our writing ancestors days and weeks to research and learn, takes us mere moments.
In fact, the only problem we have now is one of finding trusted curators. We need to develop self-discipline and discernment in seeking out correct information from reliable sources.
There is no drought of ideas.
You have more computing power in your pocket than it took to send men to the moon. What are you doing with it?
Indeed.
Are you wasting it or harnessing it? You don’t need to go to the moon, the crossroads will do just fine for our purposes.
Research. Read. Steal.
Product manuals, literature, interviews, talk radio, magazines, newspapers, television, Twitter, Google Trends, movies, Wikipedia, and on and on and on …
It’s all there, right in your pocket.
And it’s actually more than you’ll ever need.
So use it. Don’t let it use you.
2. People will give you exactly what you’re looking for
Ideas are walking around everywhere out there.
Eugene Schwartz once told a story about a copywriting job he had.
He met with the client and asked him to start talking about the product. They ended up sitting together for four hours — the client talking, and Schwartz simply listening and taking notes.
Later that night, while he was waiting for his wife to get ready for a night out on Manhattan, Schwartz wrote the ad.
The entire ad.
He said about 70% of the finished copy was composed of his client’s own words.
The headline itself was a phrase the client had hit on, word for word.
He waited two weeks, mailed the ad to the client, and they both made a lot of money.
You might think this was some kind of dirty trick on Schwartz’ part, but you’d be wrong.
Schwartz knew how to write a powerful direct response ad. The client didn’t.
Schwartz was smart enough to know that the client knew (in this case) his own product better than he ever could, and simply translated that knowledge and passion onto paper.
The ideas were sitting in the client’s head and Schwartz knew exactly what to do with them.
It goes further …
For better or worse, a writer is working all the time.
Phone calls with friends, the plumber, your spouse, your child, your boss, your client, your neighbor — they are all constantly giving you ideas.
They are all constantly telling you what they — and the entire world — truly want.
It is all grist for the mill.
All you need to do is … listen.
Steal this post
Eugene Schwartz summed this up for me perfectly:
You don’t have to have great ideas if you can hear great ideas.
I stole this post from him, and he stole it from many others.
Listen more. Talk less.
Read less. Read better.
Steal.
The Art of Finding Ideas is then … to go out and find ideas.
Originality? That’ll come from using your own voice, and your voice develops from only one thing — writing more. And more. And more.
Where have you been getting your ideas?
About the Author: Robert Bruce is Copyblogger Media’s copywriter and resident recluse.
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What Bestselling Fiction Can Teach You About Writing Better Landing Pages
Posted on 26. Sep, 2011 by Sean D'Souza in Blog, Blog Psychology, content marketing, conversion, Copywriting, Email Marketing, Entrepreneurship, Headlines, Landing Pages, persuasion, productivity, RSS Marketing, selling, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing, social media marketing, Traffic

Imagine you’re having a discussion with a talkative, hyperactive teenager.
The conversation goes something like this …
We went to the mall, and like, there was this fire in the mall. And we went from there to the movies, but we didn’t have any money and anyway the popcorn machine was broken, and so we didn’t really want to go to the movies without popcorn. But right after that we went to have some pizza and there was this creepy guy outside the store. But listen to this — because that’s not the best part. The best part is that Sylvie dumped Josh, and like, they ran into each other in the street …
Annoying right? Then why do we so often write our web copy just like that teenager talks?
Is there a better way to write a landing page?
When we write copy for our website, we sound a lot like that teenager
We tend to move all over the place with our copy.
First, we’ll try to stuff five different concepts into the headline.
Then we’ll try and fill in too many sub-heads that we want to drive home.
And then our first paragraph attempts to cover all the possible points.
And — like that teenager above — we have the entire story in our heads, but nothing quite gets across to the client.
We’re trying to cover way too many points, way too quickly.
And, as you’ve worked out for yourself, this bouncing and jumping around is exhausting for your reader.
How this mistake unfolds in an actual piece of copy
Let’s take a look at our “teenage talk” problem using a real-life example:
Headline:
Are You Fed Up With Unprofessional Contractors?
Body text:
- Contractors that don’t call you back or even show up?
- Are you done with contractors that lack the ability to communicate in a timely manner?
- How about contractors that run away from problems that crop up during and after a project?
- Are you completely over dealing with the hacks of the world?
- Have you had enough of sitting at home, babysitting the people you’re paying?
So what’s wrong with that sequence?
It gets off to a good start. The headline gets my attention without too much of a fuss, particularly if I’m having this problem right now.
But then I start reading and I get between three and five main plots and no sub-plots at all.
How do we know they’re main plots? Because we can list them out and see for ourselves. They all want to take center stage.
- Main plot 1: Contractors don’t call you back or even show up
- Main plot 2: They lack the ability to communicate in a timely manner
- Main plot 3: They run away from problems that crop up during and after a project
- Main plot 4: The so-called professional is nothing but a hack
- Main plot 5: You are tired of having to babysit these people
Just like that teenager’s story, it’s possible for us to jump from one to the other, without so much as pausing for a single breath.
So now that we know we’re creating bounce, how do we get rid of it? And how do we still use all the persuasive points we want to cover on our landing page?
How to say exactly what you’re trying to say
Just like an exciting movie or a bestselling novel, your article needs a single main plot. One primary storyline that the reader or viewer is most interested in.
You can also have sub-plots — additional points that make the story more complex and interesting, and continue to hook that reader.
So how do you know which point is your main plot? It’s the client’s most pressing problem.
That’s obvious, isn’t it? You want to get the client’s attention by driving home the biggest, scariest, buggiest problem.
Here’s how we go about it:
Headline:
Write your headline. It should only cover one big, buggy, nasty problem
Body text:
- Body text 1: Drive home the problems involved with that one point
- Body text 2: Drive home the consequences of that one point
- Body text 3: Drive home the solution to that one problem
Move to the next point.
So how does the teenager’s story look in this format?
Headline:
We went to the mall and there was a fire.
- Body text 1: What happened next at the mall?
- Body text 2: Then what were the consequences?
- Body text 3: How did we escape the fire?
With the teenager, she’d complete one story, and move to the next.
And the next …
But you may have made your point with a single story.
So what do you do with the rest of the stuff that you so badly want to get across? You bring it up later.
Let’s see how. But first let’s get back to squaring this in our original example.
Headline:
Are You Fed Up With Unprofessional Contractors …
- Body text: … That don’t call you back or even show up?
- Body text 1: Talk in detail about the problems created when the contractor doesn’t call back or show up.
- Body text 2: What are the consequences? Describe the emotions that the client feels — again, in detail.
- Body text 3: What’s the best way to avoid this wretched scenario?
And then you present your service:
- Body text 4: Presenting XYZ contracting company.
- Body text 5: Drive home the point of how you handle calling your customers back. Describe in detail how you do it — when you show up and how you follow up.
Notice we haven’t gone to Point 2 yet. And yes, I know, you’re itching to drive home that point.
But first, do you notice something?
The customer doesn’t care about your itch. They’re locked in to what you’re saying.
You’re the first person they’ve met who isn’t like that teenager, jumping from story to story.
The customer’s biggest problem is ‘unprofessional contractors that don’t call back or show up’ and you’re talking about exactly that. The customer wants to know more about that story in detail, before they’re ready to move to the next story.
So after you present your company and how it brings that one solution to their problem, you can move on to the next “subplot,” the secondary stories in your copywriting plot.
Roll out the remaining subplots in slightly less detail, in a feature/benefit format that looks like this:
Feature 1: Benefit 1. Describe the benefits of Feature 1 in strong, vivid terms.
Feature 2: Benefit 1. Now write more copy vividly describing the benefits of Feature 2.
And so on with Features 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 — adding benefits, of course, to every one of those features.
You can have as many as 8-10 paragraphs rich with details of the problem and the solutions you bring to the customer.
Having locked into the main problem and seeing how you bring that solution, the customer will happily trundle through the rest of the points, and become more convinced by the word about your ability to solve their problem.
In short, you must have a main plot, then drive it home
Later, pull in the sub-plots, but without the same level of intensity as the main.
Just remember to pick the point your customer cares most about as your main plot. ‘Sylvie dumping Josh’ has more drama than ‘no popcorn at the cinema.’
From there, you’re simply re-telling your story on the landing page.
One plot at a time
About the Author: Sean D’Souza offers a great free report on ‘Why Headlines Fail’ when you subscribe to his Psychotactics Newsletter. Be sure to check out his blog, too.
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Further Reading
6 Design Tips That Will Have Your Audience Licking Their Screens
Posted on 30. Aug, 2011 by Pamela Wilson in Blog, Blog Psychology, content marketing, conversion, Copywriting, Email Marketing, Entrepreneurship, Headlines, Online Product Launches, personal branding, persuasion, selling, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing, social media marketing, Traffic

We made the buttons on the screen look so good you’ll want to lick them.
~ Steve Jobs
You’re creating great content to attract an audience. A loyal audience that comes to know, like and trust you.
But what if you never get the attention of that audience in the first place?
What if your blog visitors take one look at your well-written words and move right along because your page looks bland, boring, and amateurish?
You lose them at hello. Your words never had a chance to take root.
That’s where design can help.
Design creates a welcoming first impression.
It engages your site visitors and draws them in so they’ll actually spend time with your information.
It’s the difference between throwing some fast food on the table in front of your guests, and presenting a meal that’s carefully prepared, beautifully plated, and smells delicious.
Want to build up an appetite for your content?
Today’s post shares 6 tips to make your blog so luscious looking, you’ll need to warn people not to lick their screens.
1. Think about your guests
Delicious design starts with an understanding of who you’re cooking it up for.
Knowing your target market and what they’ll respond to is crucial if you want to pick typefaces, colors and images that will resonate with them.
What do you need to know about them?
Ideally, you have a grasp of their age group, predominant gender and education level.
Bonus points if you are aware of psychographic details like what motivates them, what their beliefs are, and what other companies they’re attracted to and buying from.
And just like you’d want to know about food allergies before you prepared a meal, it’s important to be aware of what your target market finds unpleasant or repulsive so you can avoid it on your pages.
2. Speak their language with typography
Custom typography allows you to break out of the Helvetica-Times Roman-Georgia-Verdana fonts our sites marched in lockstep to just a few years ago.
You can express your brand or your blog’s personality through your typefaces’ personalities.
Serif typefaces — the ones with little “feet” — are classic and traditional.
Sans-serif typefaces — those with streamlined letters — are contemporary and modern.
There are exceptions within these major categories, so trust your eyes to tell you what your typeface choices are saying.
It’s easy to use custom typefaces on our blogs now. There are several good commercial offerings that will “serve up” unique fonts to your site. The Google Font API will even do it for free.
It’s an extra step, but will make your content stand out, and give your words personality.
Here’s more on choosing and combining typefaces.
3. Use colors that make sense to your market
If you’ve carefully researched your target market as outlined in step one, you may already have an idea of what colors will work for them.
To start, I recommend you choose two main colors to represent your brand.
For you, two colors are simplest to work with — you’ll have a short list to choose from every time you need to make a color choice.
For your audience, two predominant colors will make it easier to recognize and remember your brand.
How can you pick just two colors from the millions available?
Start by looking at the consumer goods your target market already buys. What colors already appeal to them?
You don’t need to walk around your local shopping mall with a swatch book, but keep your eyes open to color combinations that sell to your particular market. Take inspiration from what’s already working.
4. Tell your story with enticing images
I’ll be the first to admit it: finding a good image to work with your posts is a huge pain.
It adds to the time it takes to finish your piece, and — because you typically look for an image after you’ve finished writing — it feels like just One More Thing To Do.
As wonderful as your carefully-crafted words may be, they’ll sit there limp and lonely on the page if you don’t pair them up with a compelling image.
A great image is like the cover of a dinner party invitation.
It gives people an easy “in” to start engaging with your writing. Images are processed quickly, and if you’ve picked one that’s attractive and creates just a little bit of curiosity, it will draw readers into your headline and the first paragraph of your post.
5. Order your information hierarchically
Visual hierarchy helps your visitor navigate through your page and absorb your information in the order you prefer.
Sounds confusing, doesn’t it? Here’s how to make it work …
Look at the information on any given page of your blog. What do you want your site visitors to notice first? It’s probably your site name.
Then what do you want them to see? It might be your headline, or the image you’ve used with your first post.
Once they’ve taken in the name of your site and you’ve drawn them into your content, then where do you want them to look?
Visual hierarchy directs the viewer’s eyes through your information by giving it an order of importance by where it’s positioned, how bold or bright it is, and how much white space it has around it.
The most important information? Make it larger, bolder, and brighter. Give it some breathing room, too: white space draws eyeballs.
The next-most-important information? Make it a bit smaller, less bold, and not as bright.
As you move down the ladder of visual hierarchy, remember: the less important the information, the less visual “weight” it should carry.
6. Keep it together with a style guide
OK, you’ve used color, typography, gorgeous images and visual hierarchy to create lickable, luscious pages.
Now what?
Keep up the good work!
Maintain consistency with a simple style guide. It doesn’t have to be a complex 20-page document.
Try this:
- Open any word processor, and note your official colors
- Log your typefaces, and which font you use where
- List the file name for your official logo or header artwork, and where it can be found
- Note any resources for photography so you know where to find more of a style you’ve used in the past
- Continue to add to this document as you make design decisions about your site
Once you’ve created an attractive blog, keep people coming back to it by serving up beautifully-presented content consistently over time.
Make good design decisions, then continue applying them using your style guide notes as a reference.
And don’t forget the “please don’t lick your screen sign.” You’re going to need it!
About the Author: Pamela Wilson teaches small businesses to grow using great design and marketing at Big Brand System. Get her free Marketing Toolkit and follow her on Twitter.
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23 Reasons Your Blog Isn’t Making Any Money (And What To Do About It!)
Posted on 29. Aug, 2011 by Danny Iny in Blog, Blog Psychology, content marketing, conversion, Copywriting, Headlines, Keyword Research, Landing Pages, List Building, Online Product Launches, persuasion, selling, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing, social media marketing, Traffic

Sure, you want comments.
And subscribers, and shares, and likes.
But you don’t really care about any of these things. You want what they will eventually lead to …
Money.
Yes, traffic is good, and so is reader engagement. But if you’re reading this, chances are you’re running a blog with the intention of marketing a business and making some money.
Now, that could be a bit distressing, because most bloggers are broke.
Some bloggers don’t have traffic or reader engagement, and some bloggers have lots of both. But most bloggers aren’t making any money.
Here’s why …
The chain of conversion is everything
We tend to think of conversion as a single event, but it’s really more like a chain of events.
If you market a business online, several conversions need to take place:
- A stranger has to convert into a lead by being exposed to your message for the first time (in the online world, we call this traffic)
- A lead has to convert into a prospect by liking what you have to say (this is often done by opting in to your email subscriber list)
- A prospect has to convert into a customer by buying something from you
- A customer has to convert into a repeat customer by turning a single purchase into an ongoing buying relationship
This entire process is called the chain of conversion.
Does that sound like a tall order?
It should, because it is — for your blog to make money, you need not one, but many people to smoothly move through this entire process.
And if your blog is like most, then that probably isn’t happening.
Let’s explore all the reasons why that might be, and what you can do to fix it.
Problem #1: You’re a billboard in the desert
The most common problem that bloggers face is that strangers aren’t converting into leads.
In other words, there’s no traffic.
And if there’s no traffic, then it doesn’t matter how well-optimized the rest of your funnel is, because nobody is feeding through it.
So the first order of business is to get traffic flowing to your site. Here are some of the reasons why that might not be happening, and how you can fix it:
- Build it and they will come. Yes, content is king, but without an army of marketers, the king can get pretty lonely! The truth is that while epic content is critical, it won’t go viral all by itself without an existing audience to start the ball rolling by seeing and sharing. If you don’t have traffic, you have to go and get the word out about your content.
- You just tweet to your followers. If you’re Guy Kawasaki, then your marketing can consist of tweeting to your followers, and calling it a day. But for the rest of us (who don’t have 400,000 followers), you’ve got to get out there and promote. Build relationships with other bloggers, write guest posts, put viral campaigns together, and apply any other strategy for blog growth that you can think of — just get out there and do something!
- Marketing in the wrong place. We love to fall for the promises of magic strategies that will get us tons of traffic — the kind that showcase the success that somebody else had. The problem is that you aren’t going after their audience, and your audience may not hang out where theirs does. If you’re marketing in the wrong place, then your audience will never find you! Of course, to market in the right place, you have to know who your audience is …
- No clearly defined audience. Obviously, you can’t market to your audience if you don’t know who your audience is. It isn’t enough for you to have a general idea that you’re marketing to “bloggers” or “writers” or “stay at home moms” — you’ve got to get way more specific, to the point that you’ve created a profile of the ONE person that you’re targeting.
- Asking for the wrong action. If they haven’t heard of you, then don’t start by asking them to buy — it isn’t likely to happen. Remember that your goal with each piece of messaging is to get the audience to take the single next action. When you’re talking to strangers, the goal is for them to become leads (visit your site) and then prospects (opt in to your list). So don’t even mention whatever it is that you’ve got for sale.
- You don’t hook their interest. Yes, I’m talking about headlines. For your blog posts, for your ads, and for the teaser links to your content. They all need to hook your audience’s interest. And you happen to be reading the world’s best blog about copywriting. So go read all about headlines!
Problem #2: Selling ice to Inuits
The second problem is that you get traffic, but they all bounce — no subscribers, no customers, and you’re on a constant treadmill to generate more traffic.
In other words, leads aren’t converting into prospects.
Here’s why that might be happening, and what you can do about it:
- It’s all about you. Yes, that’s right — all of your posts are about your news, your products, your company. And you wonder why nobody signs up for more? Forget about your subject area, and think about your customers. What are their problems? What matters to them? That’s what you need to be writing about.
- Your content is “me too” content. If you’re just writing generic, bland content of the “6 tips everyone already knows about productivity” variety, or (gasp!) going so far as to actually spin articles, then the truth is that there’s no reason for people to come back to your site, because you haven’t impressed them yet. So pull out the stops and write some truly compelling content!
- You don’t draw them in. You get them to start reading your stuff, but their attention wanders, and pretty soon they’re gone forever. You need to draw them in and keep them going, section to section, until they reach the action that you want them to: subscribing!
- You don’t make it explicit. Yes, that’s right. If you want your visitors to opt in to your mailing list, then you have to say so, in so many words: “Sign up for my list to get all sorts of goodies. Do it now. Click here.” Put those words, or words like them, near your opt-in box, and make sure to include a call to action in your posts, too.
- You don’t optimize. No matter how good you are, and how well you’ve done everything else, there’s always room for improvement — and improvement is had by split-testing, split-testing, and then split-testing some more.
Problem #3: “Just the free sample, thanks”
Sometimes you’ve got traffic, and you’ve got subscribers — but you still aren’t making any money.
In chain of conversion terminology, prospects aren’t converting into customers.
This might not sound so bad (“at least they have the traffic and subscribers”), but without the money, you’re just sinking more and more work into what might be a dead-end project.
The good news is that when you’ve got an audience, you can usually find a way to make some money — let’s explore why they might not be buying, and what we can do to fix it:
- You’re selling what they need instead of what they want. As an expert in your field, you know exactly what the customer’s problem is. I don’t mean the symptoms, or the issue that they want to fix right now — I mean the real problem that lies deep down at the root of it all. The trouble is that they don’t know that, and so they aren’t looking for that solution. Start by selling what they want, and then you can deliver what they need along with it.
- It’s in the wrong format. Maybe they love what you’re offering, but they just don’t like the format. I mean, really, how many more e-books can someone buy? Try a different format — like audio, video, a virtual conference, live workshops, infographics — or something else entirely.
- The price isn’t right. Maybe your product is great, but the price doesn’t fit. You could be asking for way too much money, or you could be asking for way too little. Remember that not only does the price have to fit with the buyer’s budget, but it also has to communicate the right thing about how valuable your offering really is. So test different prices, and find the price that works best.
- You don’t ask for the sale. Yes, this comes back to being explicit. Don’t just have an “Add to Cart” link on your site — you’ve also got to tell people that you want them to buy your stuff. Tell them why they should do it, and what they’re going to get. And tell them when they should do it (right now!), which leads us to the matter of urgency …
- There’s no urgency. Why buy today when I can buy tomorrow, right? You need to give your audience a reason to take action now. Make sure the constraint is real — maybe you’re raising the price after a certain date. Maybe the first 50 people to sign up get a special bonus. Or maybe you’re closing your program on September 1 (hypothetically speaking, of course …).
- No social proof. Nobody wants to be the first one to arrive at a party — you want to know that other people are there, and having a good time. So who’s already bought your product or service? What was their experience like? Were they happy? Were they a lot like the person who is thinking about buying today?
- No guarantee. There’s something comforting about a money-back guarantee. It provides a safety net, and shows how much confidence the seller has in whatever is being offered. Most companies offer guarantees, to the point that it looks sketchy if you don’t. So you have to offer a guarantee. But don’t just offer a simple “if you’re not satisfied we’ll give you your money back” guarantee — go over the top. Give them 110% of their money back. Donate $100 to charity. Set it up so that it’s not just about satisfaction, but about results (we guarantee that you’ll add $1,000 to your bottom line in six months, or your money back).
- You don’t optimize (again). Yes, it applies here, too. If you want to make more sales, then there are a lot of things for you to split-test: your headlines, the placement, text and colors of your opt-in boxes, the style of your introduction, your product imagery, your trust seals and their placement on the site … and the list goes on.
Problem #4: Once is (apparently) enough
Okay, if you’ve made it to this point in the chain, then you’re probably doing all right — you’ve got traffic, you’ve got subscribers, and you’re even making sales.
But customers aren’t converting into repeat customers.
Which means that you’re always scrambling to find new customers, and to keep that wheel in motion. Wouldn’t you rather have the wheel sustain itself?
Here’s why your customers may not be buying from you again, and what you can do to change that:
- You don’t deliver. This is a HUGE problem; if you promise something, your customers sign up, and then you don’t deliver, then you are doing irreparable damage to your reputation and business. In the words of my marketing professor, “marketing is a promise that the organization has to keep” — and you should never, ever break a promise. This probably doesn’t apply to you, but if it does, stop reading this article, and fix it immediately!
- There’s nothing else to sell. This is a more common problem: you’ve worked so hard to build and sell your product, that by the time they’ve bought it, there’s nothing left to sell. This is worth taking the time to fix; think about what else they might benefit from — an easy add-on is some consulting to help them get the most out of what they’ve already bought. Remember that a customer who’s already spent money with you is 8 times more likely to buy from you again, and you’ve already spent the time and money to convert them the first time!
- You don’t communicate. This is sad to see, but easy to fix; you’ve got happy customers and more great stuff to sell to them, but you don’t communicate with them after that first purchase. This is terrible — you should be communicating with your customers on a regular basis, both to collect feedback about their experience, and to keep the lines of communication open so that you can sell to them again. An easy way to do this is to build follow-up directly into your product, for example with automated follow-up emails and surveys.
- You don’t ask for the sale (again). Yes, you’ve got to ask for the repeat sale, too — periodically reach out to your existing customers to see if there’s more that you can do for them, and have a specific offer ready if they do have a need.
Fixing your blog, one link at a time
Every blog has holes in its chain of conversion — and most have lots of them!
So where should you start making repairs?
The answer depends on whether you’ve already got a functioning funnel:
If you’ve already got traffic, opt-ins, and customers: Start at the end, and work your way backwards. First get more customers to buy again, then get more subscribers to buy from you, then get more website visitors to subscribe, and only then get more people to visit your website.
If you don’t have any of that stuff: Then start at the beginning — start by getting traffic to your site, and once you have traffic, work on getting them to opt-in, and then buy from you, and then buy from you again.
Now, a question: how long are you willing to wait before your blog starts delivering dollars to your bank account?
Having realistic expectations is important. If you try to run a marathon as though it were a sprint, you’ll end up exhausted on the side of the road. And if you try to run a sprint as though it were a marathon, you’ll finish dead last.
So what kind of race do you want your blog to be running?
If you’re willing for it to take 2-3 years to get your blog to where you want it to be, then a good strategy is to read business books for bloggers, along with the best blogs in the industry.
But if you want to see results sooner, then get some help. For example, you could click the link in my bio and read about our marketing training program, that just happens to be closing to the public on September 1.
About the Author: Danny Iny is an author, strategist, serial entrepreneur, and proud co-founder of Firepole Marketing, the program that teaches non-marketers to fix their chain of conversion like expert marketers. Get his free video course on how to get more money out of your business, website or blog, or follow him on Twitter @DannyIny.
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Further Reading
A 7-Step Guide to Mind Control: How to Quit Begging and Make People Want to Help You
Posted on 25. Aug, 2011 by Jonathan Morrow in Blog, Blog Psychology, Collaboration, content marketing, conversion, Copywriting, Email Marketing, Entrepreneurship, Headlines, Keyword Research, Landing Pages, List Building, Online Product Launches, personal branding, persuasion, productivity, selling, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing, social media marketing, Traffic

Well, why not?
They are the problem, right?
Here you are with a blog or a product or a charity you believe will change the world, and yet no matter how excited you are about the possibilities, no matter how much faith you have in yourself, you can’t help being worried:
- If you ask a popular blogger for a link, will you get a reply?
- If you ask a partner to email a product offer to their list, will they agree?
- If you ask a friend for a donation, will they write you a check?
You don’t know. You can’t know. And it bothers you.
Wouldn’t it be easier if you could just close your eyes, pop over into their mind, and seize control?
Yeah. Too bad it’s not possible …
Or is it?
A Brief Introduction to Mind Control
As it happens, mind control is possible. Sort of.
No, you can’t turn your customers, partners, and in-laws into mindless zombies, but you can influence them.
In fact, there’s a science to it.
Back in the 1980s, a researcher by the name of Dr. Robert Cialdini wrote a book called Influence: The Psychology of Persuasion. He outlined different principles scientifically proven to influence people, as well as suggestions for how to do it.
Since then, it’s become maybe the most important book in the field of marketing. If you haven’t read it, you should, as well as the sequel.
Here’s the bad news:
Mind control isn’t about magic powers, arcane arts, or even shaving your head and gallivanting around in a wheelchair (although, I’ve been tempted). The truth is it’s about something that makes a lot of people squeamish: marketing.
The Truth about Marketing
The core of marketing isn’t customer profiling or market segmentation or any of the other complicated nonsense taught in most business schools.
It’s infinitely simpler than that, and it can be encapsulated in one word:
Yes.
You ask a blogger for a link, and they say, “Yes.” You ask a partner to promote your product, and they say, “Yes.” You ask a customer for a testimonial, and they say, “Yes.”
If you get enough yeses, your blog/business/charity succeeds. If you don’t, it fails. It’s so simple, and yet so few of us really understand how to do it.
The good news?
You can learn.
What follows is a marketer’s guide to mind control. Use these seven strategies wisely.
1. Do all the thinking for them
The worst mistake you can make when asking anyone for anything is telling them to “Think it over.”
Here’s why: people already have too much to think about.
Between their jobs, their family, and their own hobbies and friends, their mind is already stuffed, like a suitcase bulging at the sides. Add one more sock, and the whole thing will explode.
To avoid it, they “forget” about things that aren’t very important to them, or if they do think about you, they don’t think very hard. It’s not because they are lazy or stupid. They’re just busy, and you’re probably not very high up the priority list.
And so the best strategy is to not ask them to think.
Do it for them.
- Instead of expecting them to see how your blog post will benefit their audience, explain it, and offer examples of similar posts that have done well in the past
- Instead of asking them to host a webinar for you, setup the webinar, landing pages, and emails yourself, and send them as part of your pitch
- Instead of begging a customer to write a testimonial from scratch, send them a dozen different examples to use as a guide
Be specific. Explain your reasoning. Offer proof. Tell them what to do next and why.
If you do it right, it won’t feel like asking at all. It’ll be more like advising.
And they’ll say yes. Not because of magical powers of persuasion, but because you’ve thought through everything, and it’s a no-brainer.
2. Start an avalanche
Creating a successful marketing campaign is a lot like starting an avalanche.
First, you climb up the mountain, and then you find the biggest boulder at the top, and then you sweat and grunt and strain to push the boulder over, and then you sit down and watch happily as the boulder goes crashing into other boulders, eventually bringing the whole side of the mountain down.
The lesson?
The first big yes is a pain in the butt to get, but if you get it from the right person, then getting all of the subsequent yeses is easy.
For example:
- Getting a popular blogger to tweet your post is hard, but once they do, dozens or maybe even hundreds of people will retweet them
- Convincing a leader in your niche to promote your product is tough, but once they do, everyone else will want to promote it too
- Persuading a celebrity customer to give you a testimonial can be tough, but once you do, sales skyrocket, and getting further testimonials is easy
Of course, a lot of marketers recommend taking the opposite approach.
They tell you to start from the bottom and work your way up because it’s easier.
But really, it’s just an illusion. Yes, pushing over a small rock is easier than pushing over a boulder, but the boulder is a lot more likely to cause an avalanche. So while it’s more work in the beginning to get top people to help you, it’s actually less work in the long run, and the results are far, far greater.
3. Ask for an inch, take a mile
You’ve probably heard the expression, “Give them an inch, and they’ll take a mile,” right?
It’s supposed to be derogatory. It’s supposed to be a warning against appeasement. It’s supposed to protect you against getting taken advantage of.
But it’s also great marketing.
Whenever you’re asking for anything, never start by asking for everything upfront. Instead, start small. Make it easy to get started. Reduce the risk if it flops. Let them see the results for themselves.
And when it goes well, ask for more. And more. And more.
You might think that’s unethical, but if everything is going well, why not push for more? It’s not manipulation. It’s common sense.
For instance:
It’s not psychological trickery or anything like that. It’s smart business. No one likes to risk everything upfront, and by offering progressive levels of commitment, your chances of getting them to say yes go through the roof.
4. Always have a real deadline
The keyword is “real.”
All of us have had salesmen tell us, “Well, you’d better get back to me fast, because I have three more prospects coming this afternoon, and I don’t know how long it’ll last.” It’s BS, of course.
There are no clients, and there is no urgency. The salesman is just so desperate he’s willing to lie, not only costing him your trust, but probably the sale too.
And it’s not just salesmen.
How many times have other people handed you completely artificial deadlines, thinking it will motivate you to act? Our teachers do it, our bosses do it, our family does it, and without thinking about it, you’ve probably done it too.
Stop.
Not only is it ineffective, but it’s totally unnecessary. Real urgency is easy to create. With a little thought, you can build it into your marketing. For example:
- Instead of leaving a free report on your blog forever, tell everyone it will only be available for seven days, and then you’re going to start charging $7 for it. Not only will you get a lot more downloads, but other bloggers will be a lot more likely to promote it during the window
- Instead of letting JV partners dictate when they will promote your product, schedule a launch, announce it to your list, and then forward partners the announcement, inviting them to participate
- Instead of asking customers for testimonials whenever they get around to it, show them the timeline for an upcoming launch, including a specific date to send out testimonials. You need it by then, or you won’t be able to include it
Will some of them bow out, saying they are too busy right now, and they’ll catch you next time?
Sure, but it’s better than never getting started it all. And if you let other people dictate timelines, that’s exactly what will happen.
5. Give ten times more than you take
You know you’re supposed to give before you get, right? But what you might not know is how much to give.
A lot of marketers mistakenly assume it’s a 1:1 ratio.
Before you ask for a link, you should give a link. Before you ask for promotion, you should give a promotion. Before you ask for a testimonial, you should do one thing that deserves a testimonial.
But that’s wrong. Smart marketers use a 10:1 ratio, and not just in action, but in value:
- If you want 100 visitors, send them 1,000
- If you want $1000 in product sales, sell $10,000 of their products first
- If you want one testimonial, do ten different heroic acts of customer service worthy of a testimonial
This isn’t about “You scratch my back, I’ll scratch yours.” It’s about generosity so overwhelming they can’t say no.
Yes, it’s a lot of work, but that’s the price of influence.
6. Stand for something greater than yourself
Imagine there are two homeless guys standing on a street corner.
The first guy has a normal, run-of-the-mill sign saying, “Spare a few dollars? God bless you.” The second guy, on the other hand, has a much more unusual sign: “Can’t afford to feed my family, and it’s tearing me apart. Please help, so I can stop feeling like such an awful Dad.”
Which one would you be more likely to help? The second one, right?
Forget giving him a few bucks. With a sign like that, you’d take him to the grocery store and buy him $200 worth of groceries. I know I would.
That’s the power of standing for something bigger than yourself. It makes people care.
And it applies to everything:
- Instead of writing yet another how-to post, take a stand on an important issue, arguing with both passion and unassailable logic
- Instead of starting yet another me-too consulting business, create a movement, working tirelessly to change the lives of your customers
- Instead of selling yet another step-by-step manual, sell a philosophy, filled with heroic examples to inspire your customers
Those are the types of things people want to talk about. They feel grateful just for having the chance to help you spread the word.
7. Be completely and utterly shameless
You want to know what separates a great marketer from a mediocre one?
Shamelessness.
I’m not referring to a lack of conscience, having a gregarious, extroverted personality, or any of the other ways we traditionally look at marketers. For the most part, those stereotypes are myths.
No, by shamelessness, I mean this:
An unshakable belief that what you are doing is good for the world and the willingness to do anything to bring it into being.
When you believe in your content, you don’t publish it and forget it. You promote it day after day, week after week, month after month, year after year, working tirelessly to spread the message to everyone who needs to hear it, and refusing to rest until they do.
When you believe in your product, you don’t balk at sales. You revel in it. Not because you’re greedy or desperate or egotistical, but because you know your product will help them, and so it’s your duty to get them to buy. Whatever it takes.
When you believe in your charity, you don’t beg for donations. You demand them. You grab people by the shoulders and look them in the eyes and tell them what you’re doing is changing the world, and it’s time for them to step up and do their part.
It’s not about money. It’s not about glory. It’s not even about legacy.
It’s about falling in love. It’s about being enchanted. It’s about seeing a vision so beautiful you can’t help but fight to make it real.
Do you have a vision like that? Something worth getting up every day and fighting for?
If you do, you can accomplish damn near anything.
And if you don’t, well …
What’s the point?
About the Author: Jon Morrow is Associate Editor of Copyblogger. If you’d like to learn what it really takes to become a popular blogger, check out his free videos on guest blogging.
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Is Your Social Media Strategy Stalling Because You’re Not Doing This One Thing?
Posted on 17. Aug, 2011 by Dan Zarrella in Blog, Blog Psychology, content marketing, conversion, Copywriting, Entrepreneurship, Headlines, Keyword Research, persuasion, selling, Small Business Internet Marketing, Small Business Marketing, social media marketing, Traffic

Marketers of most stripes know how important and powerful calls-to-action are.
If you want someone to take a specific action, you have to actually ask them to take that specific action.
But, it seems like social media marketers have either forgotten CTAs, or rejected them altogether.
A researcher by the name of Irving Kirsch at the University of Connecticut did an interesting experiment with hypnotically suggestable people.
Half of the subjects were put under full hypnotic trance and given a stack of 30 post cards.
They were given the hypnotic command to mail one card back to the lab each day for 30 days.
The other half of the subjects were simply asked nicely, given social requests without hypnosis to do the same.
Can you guess which group mailed more postcards back?
The second group ended up mailing more cards back. Social requests can be just as powerful as full-out hypnotic suggestions.
So why are social media marketers afraid of them?
The power words of blog commenting
When I studied blogging, I found that blog posts that included the word “comments” typically got more comments than blog posts that did not.
Take a look at this graph displaying the most commented-on words:

This is very simple, very powerful stuff.
If you want readers to comment on your blog, you have to ask them.
The power of the call to action
The most powerful evidence of the power of social calls-to-action is how effective “please retweet” is.

I studied a a statistically significant sample set of more than 10,000 tweets and found that those that used the phrases “please retweet” or “please rt” were much more likely to be retweeted.
In the case of the longer “please retweet” the tweets were four times more likely to be shared by followers.
I’m not exactly sure why there is so much resistance in social media marketing circles to calls to action, but now you know the truth.
Calls to action work!
And here’s one for you: Get more social media data and mythbusting information by registering for the Science of Social Media webinar coming on August 23rd. Register today!
About the Author: Dan Zarrella is HubSpot’s Social Media Scientist. This post contains data from his upcoming webinar The Science of Social Media, taking place this Tuesday, August 23rd. Sign up now!
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